Offer brief (3-5 sentences) but thoughtful comments on at least three posts. Address at least one of the questions below in your response. Remember to click on the photo to see and comment on the entire PDF.
1) What about the deck lends clarity or coherence to the narrative? What is distracting or confusing?
2) What questions does the documentation raise for you?
3) What visual tools have been well employed in the documentation? What tools could use more consideration?
4) Regardless of the successes of the presentation, describe some other compelling ways you could imagine the presentation of the documented phenomenon having been structured.