Image: Alix

Alix Fellman poster

Alix Fellman-5

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One thought on “Image: Alix

  1. Strengths:

    + Slides are uncluttered and clear about their message.
    + Great control of color palette and color code consistency across slides.
    + Graphs are very completely assembled.

    Weaknesses:

    + Not sure that a count chart is the best way to represent the spread of Asian languages represented in the census tract.
    + How do the slides detailing “ability to fulfill basic needs” make this assessment? This seems very subjective without listed criteria or a reference.
    + There is not a very strong sense of hierarchy, nor of movement, in the poster. More variation of scale and clearer visual flow from top left to bottom right would make the narrative more compelling.

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